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May 25Liked by Write Firster

Another good chapter. Looking forward to more.

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Hey,

I really enjoy this new story and am excited about reading how it continues. Using footnotes for the mechanical aspects fits this quite well and it is nice to have a continuous fictional flow.

How do you like the Oracles so far?

I play Star Forged with a friend of mine and we decided to use the Sundred Isles Oracles in our game for an expedition on a planet and for now they seem really nice and fitting.

Have fun on your field trip.

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I really like the Oracles, though I admit to not always being able to visualize what they state. Sometimes I have to really think or Google images to inspire me. I'm loving the Cursed die addition, though. What a great idea.

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I also have to mention I stole the footnotes idea from PTFO: https://ptfo.substack.com/

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This has been an amazing experience so far! Just catching up now, been busy at work for me also. Really looking forward to the next part, enjoy your trip.

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