Very well written, I was able to lose myself in the story and I'm interested to see what happens next. I really enjoyed this and I'm going to have to try and keep up. I can't comment on the post chapter debriefing, but I would think they'd be helpful. Cake on extra details, briefly break down complex scenes. I think if anything it reinforces what was just read, which I find helpful.
Very well written, I was able to lose myself in the story and I'm interested to see what happens next. I really enjoyed this and I'm going to have to try and keep up. I can't comment on the post chapter debriefing, but I would think they'd be helpful. Cake on extra details, briefly break down complex scenes. I think if anything it reinforces what was just read, which I find helpful.