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Write Firster's avatar

Of course I notice some grammar mistakes (tense) and such after publishing. Whoops! Fixed now.

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Kerova's avatar

Damn!! That was so good!! Brutal!

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Ivo Ziskra's avatar

So brutal. Makes for a good read. It happened so fast I had to reread it to figure out what happened. Looking forward to reading more.

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Write Firster's avatar

I really wanted it to be fast and brutal. Thanks!

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Ivo Ziskra's avatar

You're welcome.

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Whiskey, Blood and Dust's avatar

Nice write-up! A crowbar to the head is a rough way to go out. I really like this game.

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BuddhaRandom's avatar

Amazing work, I really got into it. I’m really looking forward to more.

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Raxphiel's avatar

This is shaping up to be a really cool setting and system! I've been really enjoying reading through playthroughs of it - thinking about starting one up myself. Looking forward to more to come.

Also, tried to join the discord but looks like the link has expired.

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Write Firster's avatar

oh, the link expires after 7 days, whoops! Updated the one in the post and heres the link as well: https://discord.gg/tKz9EuDz

Thanks for the support!

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SolumProtocol's avatar

I had to reread that opening combat line, I was like no way! So brutal, but very fitting for the setting haha. So many hostile encounters as well. A nice touch having Fedor be the bounty haha, looks like he's in for an even rougher time up ahead.

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Thomas's avatar

Great read! Sad for Nikita, but the transition to Gadyuka provides an interesting new focus. Nice twist that Gadyuka is actively looking for Fedor, meaning her story was already intertwined with Nikita's.

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Dave S's avatar

RIP Gadyuka. The Zone is teaching Nikita some tough lessons.

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Write Firster's avatar

Go back and read more carefully...

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Dave S's avatar

Holy crap! Nikita was the one that died! I was thinking that it was a little out of character for Nikita to track that last Believer down and execute her. Guess it wasn't out of character for Gadyuka.

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