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Quite enjoyable. I really like the way you play with the words, and it almost felt like Max could be a serial killer or has developed a taste for that. At least the story gives that perspective some room to stretch it's legs. Nevertheless. I'm looking forward to future adventures.

Enjoy your break.

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Thanks so much! I was thinking less a serial killer than just a werewolf who has had to choose who his prey is or risk losing control at terrible times, but yeah, I can see where you're coming from, for sure.

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Aug 27, 2023Liked by Write Firster

I enjoyed the side story. Enjoy your break. I looked forward to the next release.

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