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I very much like the rolls in the narrative, just the way you have them.

It makes them easier to read without clicking something.

Plus, it's super inconvenient for anyone reading via email. When they click the link it opens a we browser and takes them to Substack. I used to put my rolls in using footnotes until I realized this.

For those reasons I'd keep your rolls in the text unless you don't really want people to engage with them too much.

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This is so helpful, thanks!

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Couldn't help but read "the Zone provides" on the same tone of "the Dude abides", haha. Loved the new chapter. Been playing Stalker 2 nonstop and Olmak's adventures look a lot like my own. Thanks for writing!

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